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The great crash chapter 10

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The foot steps got closer and closer and then. Silence. A pause as their ears twitch at every sound in the area as the wind and crickets were all that could be heard she leaned in and whispered into Ratchet's ear " Ratchet, please...get outta her-" she stopped when a shadow dawned over them both, Kaylo shivered and slowly let go of Ratchet's hand " take me...I'm the one you want.." She wanted to protect him, she knew that deep deep down she had fallin' for him.

Smirking smugly he then grabbed Kaylo and pressed a button and disappeared into thin air.

Ratchet he panted as he looked around frantically, his ears fell while his tail whipped around her anger. He ran off and quickly ran down the dust path huffing and puffing while he ran. Bursting through the front door "ALISTER!!...WHERE ARE YOU!!!?" He paniced when there was no reply. 

Panting hevliy as she backed up against the bars in her pitch black cell, shivering and tears streamed down her cheeks -each tear glowing a bright blue hue- she then looked over to the side and her eyes grew wide at the sight of the familiar elder Lombax. She crawled over to the other side of her cell and lightly gripped the bars" A-Alister..."

"Ughh" groaning as he held his throbbing head, looking up at the young Lombax before him"K-Kaylo..?"

She let her ears fall against her head in fear she tried to hold in her light whimpers at the horrable memories swarming her mind-like bees attacking and stinging every inch of her throbbing brain- she closed her eyes and clawed her head with her fingur nails speaking in an accent tongue. 

"Shit!!" He ran to his room in the house and grabbed his holo-flux armour, he put it on as quickly as possable and grabbed his guns and started to pack his things up and grabbed Clank by his metallic hand and jumped into the ship. He panted and tried to track them but they had cloaking devices on them." Oh no...how the hell are we gonna find them?" He mumbled under his breath.

turning his head and looking at his furry freind in worry " wh-what's happening,Ratchet? Why are you in such anxiety?" He placed a gentle hand on his freinds arm softly.

" I-I...I don't know, buddy..." His ears fell more as he took off " someone took Kaylo and Alister..." It then hit him that Clank was in the house with Alister " w-wait...y-you were in the house with him?" He looked at Clank with wide eyes

Clank he then rolled his eyes and slowly his eyes turned into a dark black while his body went dark too " your smarter then you look space rat!!" He then grabbed the wheel and started to turn it back towards the planet and smirked darkly. He locked the wheel and jumped out of the ship

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"
Hope you guys like it^^(0; sorry it took so long and it's so short but the next one will be longer
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YellowDizzyLombax's avatar
Ohhh damn, that cliffhanger! O,O You definitely left me hanging onto every word. And I loved that simile "like bees attacking and stinging every inch of her throbbing brain", it was really good. :dummy: Keep up the work, I'll be waiting for the next chapter~ *hugs*