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The Great Crash chapter 9

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Kaylo felt so warm and fuzzy on the inside, her mind went blank as if standing in an endless white dream, feeling the warnth from the others fuzzy yellow lips pressing against her own. It nearly made her head and mind spin and swirl, he carefully placed a hand on her waist and hip, a blush stumbbled over his muzzle gradually.

She soon pulled away with a soft suck between their lips as they lingered in that postion slowly opening his eyes and looking into her ,beutiful and perfect emerald eyes. speachless he was, he had no words to define how he felt " U-Ummmm....I-I-I've...n-n-never...ever done that before" he whispered gently to her.

She blushed madly and moved her head away from him slightly and looked down at her lap" n-n-neither have I..." she tried to hide her blush but it wasnt working all that well, her ears fell against her head a bit in nervousness, Ratchet gently placed a couple of fingurs under her chin and got her to look at him. He smiled at her warmly " it's okay...thank you...I guess..." he chuckled a bit as he shrugged while ,slowly removed his hand away from her chin

" I suppose...i-I should...Ummm...ya know..Um" he carefully got up and off the bed carefully, was stopped when a gentle hand was placed on his strong arm, turning his head around before his body did the same looking at her with cuiosity in his bright green eyes.

"I really don't want to be alone" she looked down at her lap a bit with low ears, she sighed a bit in sarrow " It's okay...I don't mind...why don't you join me? I'm only going outside with my freind" he looked at her and smiled at her a bit more.

She nodded her head and held his hand and tried not to blush from it as she walked with him outside to the front porch where the elder was siting, opening the door for them Kaylo stepped out first .

And didn't dare let his hand go, Alister looked up from his book , taking off his reading glasses "oh, i see your finally awake..." he smiled as he relaxed his back up against the back of the chair. Smiling at them both as he didn't noitce them holding hands. His eyes were closed as he slowly looked over at the other two " hey...its good to see you awake-" his ears went uneven a bit as he looked at their hands in wounder"U-Ummm..."

Ratchet then blushed as he carefully let go of her hand and tied his fingurs together behind his back ax he rocked on his feet and toes a little " yeah...Umm...s-so she s-said...Uh...th-that she w-was sent h-here..." he said to the elder nervously as he looked down at his feet, moving his eyes to look at Azimuth for a quick moment and then back down at his toes.

Azimuth did everything he could to keep himself from busting out laughing from Ratchet's actions- he pressed his lips together in his mouth with a grin- he put his feet down from the table as he stood up and collected his nervse as he took a deep bretah through his nose. " okay...well its about time i start making supper, why don't you two watch TV and I'll start on dinner" he walked into the house while snickering to himself.

Ratchet rolled his eyes a little, sighing to himself, rubbing the back of his neck. Slowly siting down on the nice comfy couch, smiling nervously"Sooooo...heh..." Kaylo looked up at him with her soft green eyes" so, he's nice...Ummm..hey why don't we take a walk?" she asked kindly as she sliped her hand into his.

"O- Okay..." he stood up as hs opened the door for her and they both walked off the porch and started to walk the dusty path near the house" so...you any good spots we could just relax at~…?" she asked sweetly to Ratchet, her green eyes looked as if they glowed in the slight moon light, her long hair fluttered in the wind lightly.

He looked at her and glanced back in.front of him" not really...but I do know one place" he started to lead her out to the perfect place, as it was on a high cliff , showing the perfect veiw, sitting down with his legs hanging off the edge. Kaylo smiled softly as she sat down beside him, closeing her eyes from.the soft warmth that touched down onto her fur gently, sighing in peace.

Feeling so warm as she opened her eyes and aced her head on his shoulder softly" i must say...this is  the perfect place..." she flicked her tail over the ground lightly, her ears fell so that she could nuzzle her chesk against his and keep her head on his shoulder. A ship in the distence watched them closely, stalking darkly in the distence.

A light was then shined down on them from the ship, sqweenting his eyes as he held out an arm as if to protect Kaylo, he stood up with her behind him. Kaylo then took his hand and started to run as quickly as poassable from the light as she panted heavliy, fear was clear in her eyes as she ran.

Ratchet tugged her to a near by Cave quickly as he pulled out a contruto pistle while panting, still holding her hand as they then started to hear foot steps slowly coming towards them, the ever so scurtinizing sound of boots that echoed and bounced off the cave walls, making their hearts pound faster and beat harder. Breathing ever so fearful to her, she shivered madly, clining to his hand as her ears were as high as they could be.

Kaylo clng to Ratchet's hand in fear, as the sound and beating of the boots came closer, and closer.
Phew got it done finally took me long enough, but I've had such a rough couple of weeks 
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OMG! That is so romantic in the beginning!