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Different end to Crack in Time

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Ratchet ran through the small tunnel that lead to the room where everything would change, he ran as he panted a little, his ears fell s he shouted "ALISTER!!!..DON'T DO THIS!!...PLEASE!!...THIS WONT WORK!!" He yelled at the top of his voice, he ran over to him and grabbed his arm as he tried to stop the elder.

Alister turned around and shoved him to the ground roughly " this WILL work Ratchet!!...you were suppose to be by my side!!...if your father was here!!!" he panted heavliy for a moment" he would be ashamed.." He let his ears fall as  his tail whipped about in anger.

Fire filled his eyes as the younger rose back up to his feet, he growled as he let a single tear run down his golden furred cheek, he brought out his omni-wrench, his arm shivering from the tight grip of it. 

Azimuth then ran with his wrench on the highest point of energy possable, as the orb on his wrench was white. Running full force at the younge as he then clashed their wrenches together, bearing his teeth as he pushed down as hard as he could, determination burning deeply in his eyes.

Ratchet saw the anger, his sarrow,loss. But also his greatest fear. It was the fear of not being able to redeem his one me only mistake. Arms shivering as he felt the silence of his deep thought into the moment, as well as seeing in his eyes his reason. Tears streamed down the golden Lombax's cheeks "please...don't do this...I know what this is like...just listen to me Azimuh, please...let me help..let me help" he whispered as he struggled to fight against the elder.

His eyes then went wide slowly from the others words, as well as from what his eyes were telling him, he looked down at him and shook his head " No...for Kaden...for our home...for you.." He let tears run down his white furred cheeks as he panted and shiverd a little

The younger nodded his head as he felt the others grip on him losen a bit, as he looked at him with nothing but understanding in his eyes "pleas-..." He then had a knife stabbed into his side roughly as Azimuth let him drop to the floor as he rushed over to the golden lever and was about to pull it until he was attacked by a cloaked figure, and thrown onto the floor as he struggled under his grip

Panting as he held down the elder and took down his hood. A Lombax with dark golden fur and bright green eyes with strips on his cheeks, but he was almost a replica of Ratchet. He looked down at Alister as he nodded his head " No...that's one thing your wrong about...I'm right here Al...don't do this...please" he panted out as he looked over at his son that was being assisted by his wife

Ratchet looked up at the women as he looked at her in amazement as he thought he was alone all these years, but he then looked over at Kaden, his eyes growing wide as he glanced back over at his mother "m-m-mom...d-d-da...d-dad...?"
I've been wanting to do something like this for a while now, so let me know if you want me to do a part two ^^;
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zenith1988's avatar
This is a cool fic.
Are you going to post it on fanfiction?