literature

A Gift to YellowDizzyLombax

Deviation Actions

lixe123's avatar
By
Published:
581 Views

Literature Text

On a lonesume planet where five Lombaxes lived as Ratchet, Hunter, Alister Azimuth and a girl Lombax named Castiy and her sister was with the twins as she always had her eye on Hunter but was always to nervuse ,or scared to tell him how she felt towards him at all as they were both the same age she blushed at the thought of talking to Hunter.

Ratchet then walked up to Castiy as she had White fur and sparkly Purple eyes as her strips were a vary silky teal. "Hey Castiy..." he said to her in a alluring kind of way as he really liked her as he would always try to charm her. Castiy rolled her eyes at him" hello Ratchet...its nice day to be out..." she smiled as told him in a kind way as her tail lightly flicked behind her, as her ears flicked lightly as she smiled a bit.

As her ears then percked up once she saw Hunter come around the corner with her sister Kaylah as she smiled more at Hunter. As Kaylah had blue fur with black strips and long teal hair with green eyes.As she always had feelings for Ratchet as she walked up to him"Hey guys..." she smiled at her sister and Ratchet but mainly Ratchet.

Castiy smiled at Hunter warmly as he walked up to them. Hunter held in his growle as he walked up to them and looked at Castiy with light red cheeks as he liked her as she was the only one actully nice to him. Ratchet blushed from Kaylah smiling at him warmly as he did like Castiy but everytime he came close to Kaylah he had this warm fuzzy feeling inside him, as he smiled back at her as the setting sun over the horizon made his fur shine as well as the others.

Hunter smiled at Castiy as he then let his ears fall a little as he walked pasted them, and into the house as he really wanted to talk to Alister for a bit to see what he had to say. But then his ears perked up when he heard a loud crash in the kitchen and angerd muffles.

As they died down, and he looked around the corner and saw Vorslon's goons carry Azimuth away and too a near by ship as his eyes grew wide from the sight, as he then heard a scream outside .As he rushed outside where the others were as he then saw a ship take off into the distence as he panted while he startd to panic as well.

Hunter then ran in a panic to his ship and took off fallowing the ship quickly as he didn't know what eles to do as he falllowed them with caution and distence .As satrs and planets passed by with out a care as he was filled with worry, as he still had low ears as his tail whipped about beside his leg in aggatation from the situation he was placed in.

Castiy was shoved into a cell alone by a gaurd as she ran to the gate but it was to late ,as the gate closed before she had the chance to reach it .As she gripped the bars with her small hands as she shook the bars fercily "LET US GO ,YOU BUNCH OF FUCKING MONSTERS!!!.." she screamed at the top of her voice as she had a collar around her neck along with the other three as their cells were close to each other in the enormuse war ship.

Ratchet screamed in agnoy from the shock he recived from the collar around his thin neck ,as he fell to the ground while holding the collar with his free hand. As the other was holding him up slightly from the ground, as his ears fell weakly from the shock. Kaylah was sitting in the coner of her cell panting heavliy as her cell was next to Ratchet's as ,she trembbled from the fear running through out her body as her mind was playing tricks on her at her every move.As her head was turing from side to side in panic

Ratchet looked over at Kaylah and noitced how scared she was as she went over to the bars in her and his cell " it's okay K-Kaylah...just c-calm down...l-listen to me...just s-stay calm...we will g-get...outta h-here...trust me.." he pulled his eyebrows together under a worrisume expresstion across his muzzle .As he watched her come closer to him through the bars of the cell she held his hand for comfort. " I'm s-so afraid..Wh-what do we do?..." she looked into his eyes with a hopeful gaze.

"I won't let anything happen to you Kaylah...I promise you this Kaylah...with all my heart and soul I swear..." he had sencertiy in his voice as he held both her hands through the bars gently as he felt her sqweezed his hands in fear.As tears fell down her cheeks ,as Ratchet cupped her cheeks in his soft and calm palms as he wipped her cheeks dry with his thumbs ever so softly .As he looked into her eyes with nothing but care and love for her, as he deeply looked into her beutiful and soft green eyes as he kept his soft and calm hands on her blue furred cheeks gently.

Vorselon then walked into the main cell holding area in his war ship as he smirked at them as four of his goons went into each of their cells as they then dragged them out of their cells roughly .As they whipped Alister hard on his bear and musculer back as he was fighting against them hard as Vorselon chuckled at the elder fighting against them as he snickerd at his yells of pain.
"AAHHHHHAGAHHHHHHAHHH!!!!..." Alister screamed in agony as a goon whipped him hard as blood ran off his back and to the ground "ALISTER!!!..." Ratchet yelled towards him as he panted as he watched Kaylah and Castiy get shived to their knees like him and Alister roughly.

They were all dragged into a cell forcefully as they all were then chained to a wall with their arms over their heads and their feet just above the ground as three goons, and Vorselon were in the cell with them to watch them carefully.

Hunter soon found their signals from their nav-units as he landed the ship with care a bit of distence away from the base .As he grabbed his guns and gagets quickly as he jumped out of his ship, and ran to the base as his boots beat along the ground .As he was perfectly silent as he ran to the base as he kept his ears perked up to their highest in caution , as he snuck into the base holding a pistal in his hand pionting down just in front of his moving feet.

Hunter then stopped outside the cell the other four was as he then broke down the door with ,one singal kick as he shot the goons and walked up to Vorselon "Let. Them. Go or eles i'll hang YOU up there and i'll have my fun with you, you scum bag" he told through his gritted teeth and had fire in his eyes as he saw them toren up and blood dripping down their bodies as he narowed his eyes at him. Vorselon then mashed a button on the console and let them go.

He then rushed to their sides and healed them as he quickly picked up Castiy in his arms gently and looked down and into her eyes and took her to the ship as Ratchet carried Kaylah to the ship as Alister fallowed them out as he placed her in the back of the ship gently. Ratchet let Kaylah rest in his lap as he smiled down at her gently and nuzzled his cheek against the top of her head as she snuggled with him.

later at home...

Castiy was sitting in her room alone as she had her head filled from the memories of what happened to her that day as she started to cry on her bed as she was curled up on her side with her arms wrapped around her stomach as ,her tail wrapped around her waist tightly. Hunter then walked by her room as it was late out so he had to turn on the light in the hallway .As he then walked up to Castiy's room and knock on her door "C-Castiy...are you alright?" he asked in worry as he slowly opened the door as Castiy gasped and quickly sat up and wipped her cheeks dry.

Hunter sighed as he sat next to her on her bed and held her hand in his own as he then hugged her gently " I-I'm okay...just still...a-a l-little..f-f-freaked out from...wh-what happened today..." she sniffled as she looked up at Hunter with her inncent eyes as she let her white furred ears, with teal strips as her long wavy blond hair fell down with her head as she swallowed nervusely as she held his hand back.

Hunter lightly smiled at him as she looked into his eyes as she blushed a little from it as she slowly leaned in with him and softly pressed their lips together as Hunter placed a hand on her cheek gently as they both felt that amazing spark inside them

to be continued...
I hope you like Dizzy :D
© 2014 - 2024 lixe123
Comments3
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
YellowDizzyLombax's avatar
Awww, hehehe, that was so sweet! I'd love to see a second part to see where the kiss lead :giggle: Thank you so much for this!